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Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Ammar_Rich on Wed May 11, 2011 4:43 pm

((OOC))
In game name : Ammar_Rich
In game level : 13
Bank balance : over 1 million

((IC))

1.Family story

My Family story:Wsup,my name is Ammar Rich.I was born in Los Santos and when I was 13 years old I lost my family,cause they were on drugs,they used to many cracks at a time,I knew that the day will come,but what would I do now all alone???Without parent,money,food,something to drink,almost without anything,all the money was spend on the drugs...
I needed to earn some money to survive,but how?I started it by mats smuggling and I earned a lots of money.Few years later I collected enough money,but I didn't knew what to do with it,so I hang out with my homies for a while and I came up to an idea to make my own family...I was on the search for my new family and I met my new homies Moustafa, Mark and Lessu Eregha,but 10 days later when groove attacked us I lost lessu,I think he is dead.I got a picture of me and him,we were the hardest gangstas.
I had many homies with me,but some shitty groove came and popped them,now I came here to spend all my money to supply them,so that we can defend us better and I kept mats smuggling.Few days later I was caught by the cops for mats smuggling,,they took all my mats and weapons.I was arrested for 1 month to spend in the jail.First 6 days were hard.My 9th day in jail,Moustafa came with our gangs to rescue me out of the jail.They had a plan how to do it and everything went perfect.
From that day I was wanted.I had to hide from them every 10 minutes,but hopefully I changed my documents,so I haven't got the same problem anymore.
I lost my mats,but I still had the money.
The cops weren't my only problem,groove was the biggest problem ever,their leader was Sean,more information of him... I don't got.They killed many of my homies and I bet they've done the same thing with Lessu,so I want revenge.
I will beat all the groove gangs,cause I won't forgive what they done to my family,so I will come and pick up my glory and here I will end my story....



2.Leaders and members
Leader : Ammar Rich
Members : Aslamboly Moustafa
Members : Mark McCaile




((3.Family rules,IC and OOC))
((IC))
Always respect higher ranks,never ignore an order from a higher rank,bring supply to the safe,like drugs,materials,guns.Take only guns and if the leader or rank 6 or rank 5 allows you to take some drugs.
Never fall back,except if the rank 6 or rank 5 says it,so fight to the end.
Always say Bro to every member from our Family.Respect the member as your brother.
Rank 6 and 5 member may not invite people without the leader,except if all rank 6 and 5 agrees with it and the leader isn't in town.

((OOC))
Don't ever Rule break,like don't asspull,DM,PG,etc.
Don't ever Insult /f chat.
Don't ask for ranks.
Don't Spam /f chat.
Don't take over points if there is no family online and if there are under 2 members from our family online.


4.HQ,4 Family vehicles

Vehicle's :
1. Sultan-blue
2. Infernus-blue
3. PCJ-600-blue
4. Sultan-blue


HQ:





5.Ranks

Rank 1 : Dead walker
Rank 2 : Hood Rat
Rank 3 : Thug
Rank 4 : Soldier
Rank 5 : Punk-Ass-Bitch
Rank 6 : Nemesis

6.Skin ids

Skin Rank 1 : 137
Skin Rank 2 : 29
Skin Rank 3 : 123
Skin Rank 4 : 124
Skin Rank 5 : 121
Skin Rank 6 : 122
Girl ID Skin : 211


7.How to join

((IC))

To join our family you will have to [R]a[P] with our family at our HQ.
You must show your self that you are loyal and that you will die for our family.

((OOC))

((RP to max.You will have to know all the basic rules... Example : what is MG and to define it,RP and to define it,etc....Know to RP.))


Last edited by Ammar_Rich on Thu May 12, 2011 1:22 am; edited 3 times in total

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Devin_Norris on Wed May 11, 2011 8:45 pm

i Dont think your alowed to use that building as an HQ.

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Jacob on Wed May 11, 2011 9:24 pm

Ammar can't RP nor can Mark McCaine.

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Kayla on Wed May 11, 2011 9:48 pm

I think this name is copied not sure about everything else. Its from other RP server. Not gonna say it though .

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Ammar_Rich on Thu May 12, 2011 12:04 am

Do I need to change my HQ?

@jacob aka Jake,you avoid to RP man,I am a better RP-er then you XD,so don't lie and Mark McCaine RPs good.

@Kayla its not copied,cause its mine name...lol

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Ammar_Rich on Thu May 12, 2011 12:24 am

There I changed my HQ,is it now ok?

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Devin_Norris on Thu May 12, 2011 12:55 am

Please Fix the Story Please. its kinda confusing

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Ammar_Rich on Thu May 12, 2011 1:22 am

I fixed my story I hope its better now.

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Re: Ammar Rich's Family Application - Umbrella Corporation

Post by Kubz on Fri May 13, 2011 4:00 am

ACCEPTED
You got better at RPing, and ur HQ is ok. You have to donate for the cars though, srry. Also, I can map your HQ really nice if you donate.

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